Aimee Mullins Overcomes
Aimee Mullins is an empowered woman who conquered her disablity by making it beautiful, and taking advantage of it. Instead of having regular prothetic legs she made hers into high fashion. Mullins can make herself as tall or short as she
wants and has really turned her prosthetics into art. She has appeared on numerous covers and has walked in high fashion shows such as Alexander McQueen. She believes its good that beauty can be constructed. Beauty is overcoming. It's finding a way to make your flaws beautiful and becoming confident in them. She is an amazing example for men and women around the world that beauty is confidence.
wants and has really turned her prosthetics into art. She has appeared on numerous covers and has walked in high fashion shows such as Alexander McQueen. She believes its good that beauty can be constructed. Beauty is overcoming. It's finding a way to make your flaws beautiful and becoming confident in them. She is an amazing example for men and women around the world that beauty is confidence. 
Olivia, I like the graphics that you've included in your response. They directly connect to the TED Talk. Good job.
ReplyDeleteAt the same time, you must proofread more carefully.
Man equals singular.
Men equals plural.
Woman equals singular.
Women equals plural.
You must fix little errors like this to earn higher than a B- for the course.
Additionally, what sentence best identifies your main point? Remember that your main point always goes at the end of your introduction.
Also, please remember that this assignment was to write one page. You wrote a paragraph. Please do develop more than this for your next assignment.
I push you because you can do it.
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